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Post  Romilda Vane on July 8th 2010, 10:43 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6122940/1/Who_I_Am

So I'm trying my hand at fanfiction. This is the first chapter of what I hope turns out to be a decent story. Nikki has already given me a lovely review.
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Post  Viktor Krum - Inactive on July 9th 2010, 2:41 am

OMG
IT'S REALLY GOOD SO FAR!
I LOVE IT!


Regulus was somewhat of a crybaby

HAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAA
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Post  Daphne Greengrass on July 9th 2010, 2:44 am

But something happened to us.

Something we couldn't avoid.

We grew up.

I really like this part for some reason. It's good!!
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Post  Viktor Krum - Inactive on July 9th 2010, 2:54 am

I like that part too!
It's like...
WOAH


-waits for more-
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Post  Romilda Vane on July 9th 2010, 3:14 am

Thanks guys. I've never gotten those reactions before. I mean, I've always gotten the "You're really good response," but no one has ever pointed out specific parts that they liked, or told me they can't wait for more.

*is Quaffly by this point*

If all goes well I should be able to update tomorrow, Saturday at the latest.
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Post  Pansy Parkinson-Malfoy on July 9th 2010, 3:19 am

That last bit that Dee quoted was my favorite too!!
I really like the way you've written it, the point of view and diction and whatnot.
My only question was about the age/order of the Black sisters. I was always under the impression that Bellatrix was the eldest?
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Post  Romilda Vane on July 9th 2010, 3:26 am

Thanks Pansy.
I actually will be changing PoVs throughout the story.
In regards to their birth order, Bella is the oldest and Cissa is the youngest, but I have a specific scene practically already written in my head, and in order for it to happen the way I want I had to change their birth order.
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Post  Addie Lupin on July 9th 2010, 3:32 am

I LOVE it!
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Post  Pansy Parkinson-Malfoy on July 9th 2010, 3:32 am

Just was curious! Smile
I really like it so far, I'm excited to read more!
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Post  James Potter - Inactive on July 9th 2010, 3:39 am

I LIKE IT. I think you've got good prose. Like, a lot of fanfics I've read are good enough, and I like them, but they're not ASTOUNDING in the way they're written. I really like your prose. Yeah.

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Post  Romilda Vane on July 19th 2010, 9:06 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6122940/2/Who_I_Am

So this took a lot longer than I expected to finish this, but here it is. Enjoy!
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Post  Remus Lupin on July 19th 2010, 9:17 pm

*flails* It's really good!!!!!! I love it!!!
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Post  Romilda Vane on July 19th 2010, 9:22 pm

*blushes* Thanks. Now I leave it alone until August so I can use anything I write for AugMo.
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Post  Angelina Johnson on July 20th 2010, 2:48 pm

Do I have to wait that long to read more?

That makes me sad.
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Post  Romilda Vane on July 20th 2010, 2:55 pm

It won't be long, but I really want to use it for AugNoWriMo. Although, if Chapter 3 is as short as I think it will be, I might write it before August.
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Post  Viktor Krum - Inactive on July 25th 2010, 11:47 pm

I JUST READ THIS NOW


The house elf turned and grinned toothily up at me. "Master Regulus is hiding in his closet, Mistress Narcissa."
I LOVE YOU


"Sirius hates me. He hates our family. He hates me, he hates Mom and Dad, he hates your parents, he hates Bella, and he hates you too!"
AWWW
This makes me sad. I almost teared up. -hugs little Reggie-

OMG
I LOVE IT
MORREEEEE
WRITE MORE
-chants-
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Post  Romilda Vane on July 26th 2010, 12:04 am

I LOVE YOU TOO!!

I have far too much fun writing Regulus like that. I should make him grow a pair.

...Nah.

I almost cried too. Especially since it's true.

Thank you!! I think I will write more over vacation. Which is now. If we're not doing anything tomorrow, I'll definetly start.
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Post  Demelza Robins on July 26th 2010, 3:08 pm

YAY! More Coming! Very Happy
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Post  Romilda Vane on August 3rd 2010, 8:43 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6122940/3/Who_I_Am

La la la.
Here is Chapter 3.
I kinda think I messed up Bellatrix, but whatever.
Let me know.
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Post  Viktor Krum - Inactive on August 3rd 2010, 8:45 pm

FIREBEER
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